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So beautifully written, So discriptive, we always all remember that first kiss, our first love. It's not a bad thing to remember, it's always good to reminise our pasts once in awhile. Our first loves are always something good to look back on, and by doing so we realize how much we learn from each and every relationship.
Good job on this poem
~G
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gianina622
on May 9, 2005 at 10:44 PM
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So beautifully written, So discriptive, we always all remember that first kiss, our first love. It's not a bad thing to remember, it's always good to reminise our pasts once in awhile. Our first loves are always something good to look back on, and by doing so we realize how much we learn from each and every relationship.
Good job on this poem
~G
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gianina622
on May 9, 2005 at 10:44 PM
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Time n tide waits for none, a heatfelt poem...... liked it a lot.....
posted by
Elan27
on May 9, 2005 at 10:29 PM
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It would be nice if we could control time in such a way.
posted by
MountainClimber57
on May 9, 2005 at 9:14 PM
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