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It is the latter part of the poem that hope will be the most enligthening, though thank you for reading and commenting!
posted by
MountainClimber57
on May 6, 2005 at 7:10 AM
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This is great work
Suicide Bombs exploding,
Amored tanks moving,
Loaded rifles shooting,
Bam! Its like it just shot you in the face. It has quite a contrast about half way through.
Still, right there, and to the point. A good heavy song could use this.
posted by
Hammock_Noweilz
on May 5, 2005 at 11:28 PM
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