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this is great.....
its like unburdening...
posted by
_Symphony_
on May 1, 2005 at 5:58 AM
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cleansed and free...
temple, I hope all is ok.
posted by
littlemspickles
on May 1, 2005 at 12:30 AM
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You are a talent, Temple.
I write when the mood or muse strikes (hard, because I'm a bit obtuse), but nothing on your level. If you aren't published, you should be. Your poetry is mesmerizing.
posted by
saul_relative
on April 30, 2005 at 7:16 AM
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Pretty imagery as usual...
a bit forlorn, I hope you can be cleansed by the rain in whatever way you need baby...
posted by
jimmy68
on April 29, 2005 at 10:23 PM
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"the tick tock soul" - this will stay with me. A reminder of time slipping away.
posted by
Ca88andra
on April 29, 2005 at 5:59 PM
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