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oops, i am lagging way behind. i'll stick with the line, though

posted by muser on April 16, 2005 at 12:21 AM | link to this | reply

4th line possibility?
friendship must be stronger than the castles

posted by muser on April 16, 2005 at 12:10 AM | link to this | reply

It's times like this that give our bond such form.

posted by A_Norseman on April 15, 2005 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

GOOD LINE! BUT IT NEEDS TO END WITH A WORD THAT RHYMES WITH "STORM"

suggestions.... end your line with "charm"  or "harm" or "warm" 

slant rhymes like these are ok

posted by Ebb.and.Flow on April 15, 2005 at 11:30 PM | link to this | reply

Just a try, next line of 10 syllables:
One for all and all for one is our rule.

posted by A-and-B on April 15, 2005 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply