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Great Idea Decshak!!! I'm going to post the first three lines of our group

sonnet momentarily/come on poets!  Join in

posted by Ebb.and.Flow on April 15, 2005 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

It would be a chance to add another advertisement to recent postings

so we could attract more budding poets to our cause....

posted by Decshak_ on April 15, 2005 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

Hey, EBDAWG! Why don't you post the sonnet as it is now built,

so we can start from the three lines, again, and see it as it now is....?

posted by Decshak_ on April 15, 2005 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Hi! Great poem. I really enjoyed this. Are you writing any more soon. I would love to read them. I have just started adding some of my poems here on blogit, have a read, I think you will enjoy them!!!

posted by Stewart_Harding on April 14, 2005 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

Here's one. I assume we will get better at this over time...

The silliest causes each one defends

posted by Decshak_ on April 14, 2005 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

I should take this one back, for its tenses don't match..."after death"

would have to be the future, while "transends" is the present...let me think a while...

posted by Decshak_ on April 14, 2005 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

I'll have a go...

Even after death our friendship transends

posted by Decshak_ on April 14, 2005 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

EBDAWG

My line:

Together any castle we would storm 

posted by Talion on April 11, 2005 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply