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Thanks Dee! See ya!

posted by Voyager9940 on March 5, 2005 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for reading

chapter five will be added soon.

posted by Dee2206 on March 5, 2005 at 4:44 PM | link to this | reply

Very passionate writing! It's nice to read that a Greek man can be very gentil and tender, one should normally think they are a bit brutal, you chose not to show them like that. What an intrige at the end, hope to read the next chapter sonn! See you!! VOYAGER9940

posted by Voyager9940 on March 5, 2005 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply