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mcbreeze, sometimes the concrete shoes fit well!

posted by Ca88andra on September 4, 2005 at 3:00 AM | link to this | reply

loved the concrete shoes here lol xxx

posted by mcbreeze on September 3, 2005 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you saul - hope you perked up later!

posted by Ca88andra on June 12, 2005 at 2:14 AM | link to this | reply

Good stuff. This poem was so real, it made me tired...

posted by saul_relative on June 11, 2005 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you iSiS!

posted by Ca88andra on May 21, 2005 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent, Cassandra!

Loved this line:

"head heavy as concrete shoes"

Really nice work.

posted by myrrhage_ on May 21, 2005 at 10:00 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Silly!

posted by Ca88andra on May 2, 2005 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply

oh my, you really conyey fatigue so eloquently. This is without a doubt a winner. ~Silly

posted by SillySoul88 on May 2, 2005 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Vibrance!

posted by Ca88andra on April 22, 2005 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

one of your best poem ever.

Love, Vib

posted by Vibrance on April 22, 2005 at 5:06 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Monogamy - I'm glad you think I captured the feeling!

posted by Ca88andra on April 17, 2005 at 4:29 PM | link to this | reply

I have never read anything that described fatigue  more acurately.

posted by Monogamy on April 17, 2005 at 4:10 PM | link to this | reply

I really enjoyed your work. Will you be writing any more in the near future? I have just started adding my poems to Blogit. Have a read, I think you will enjoy them!!!

posted by Stewart_Harding on April 10, 2005 at 11:09 AM | link to this | reply

Thank Stewart I will check out your site.

posted by Ca88andra on April 8, 2005 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

I really enjoyed reading this. Do you write many poems? I have just started adding my own poems on Blogit. Have a read if you like, I think you will enjoy them!!! Keep it up!!!

posted by Stewart_Harding on April 7, 2005 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Doc!

posted by Ca88andra on March 23, 2005 at 1:49 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for the post, Cass :) Love your poems!

posted by GuiltyDoc on March 23, 2005 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you  Silly!

posted by Ca88andra on March 15, 2005 at 12:40 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice, you captured the nothingness the fatigue does to the body

Good. ~Silly

posted by SillySoul88 on March 13, 2005 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony - thank you!

posted by Ca88andra on March 5, 2005 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

lovelylady - no, I wasn't thinking of you, I was thinking of going home to bed!

posted by Ca88andra on March 5, 2005 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

Moondawg - yes, concrete can do that to you! Thanks.

posted by Ca88andra on March 5, 2005 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

Quirky - thanks! I'm not sure I like the fact that my writing puts you to sleep.... *wink*

posted by Ca88andra on March 5, 2005 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

Voyager - thank you!

posted by Ca88andra on March 5, 2005 at 8:51 PM | link to this | reply

wow.....this was brillaint

posted by _Symphony_ on March 5, 2005 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Ca88

Where you thinking of me when you wrote this one??  It fits me to a t!!

Hope you get some sleep soon...

posted by lovelyladymonk on March 4, 2005 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Great job of capturing the feeling

I call it my block head state. Like you say the heads full of concrete and there is no sense in me even trying to think, or do anything.

posted by Moondawg on March 4, 2005 at 3:05 PM | link to this | reply

CA88,

I...am...feeling...very...drowsy...now..........must sleep.

Okay, seriously, that poem perfectly captured the "feeling" of fatigue. Nice job!

posted by Julia. on March 4, 2005 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Ca88andra, your poem is wonderful, so many new words revealed to me......it has been a long time. See you around! VOYAGER9940

posted by Voyager9940 on March 4, 2005 at 1:32 AM | link to this | reply

LOL Ciel!!!

posted by Ca88andra on March 4, 2005 at 12:46 AM | link to this | reply

That's enough computer Marbles for you!

posted by Ciel on March 4, 2005 at 12:42 AM | link to this | reply