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Beautiful poem, Mia...

I have fresh tears in my eyes...Your brother would be proud.

 

posted by lovelyladymonk on April 22, 2005 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

I really enjoyed your work. Will you be writing any more in the near future? I have just started adding my poems to Blogit. Have a read, I think you will enjoy them!!!

posted by Stewart_Harding on April 10, 2005 at 11:09 AM | link to this | reply

Hey! Really enjoyed this poem. Keep up the good work, I would definately like to read some more of your work soon. Have a look at my poems if you like, I have just starte dputting them on here. I think you might enjoy them!!!

posted by Stewart_Harding on April 8, 2005 at 7:54 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice poem. I enjoyed this I have just started putting some of my own on Blogit. Have a read, I think you will enjoy them!!!

posted by Stewart_Harding on April 6, 2005 at 5:33 AM | link to this | reply

MiaElla--a poem to remember....

posted by scriber on February 24, 2005 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

so beautifully written

but so heartbreaking sad

posted by _Symphony_ on February 24, 2005 at 4:55 AM | link to this | reply

I lost my brother 2 years ago in May in a plane crash, so I was struck with your poem...

posted by poetjpb on February 23, 2005 at 10:08 PM | link to this | reply

Wednesday, February 23, 2005 My Brother's Poem (possible edit) To Wakely, From Her Daddy looking down from the clouds, safely home in Heaven.   My little girl, please don’t cry know that in the beginning my world was dark, in sorrow, without purpose, you  brought hope into my life like a beacon of light   My perfect creation, my princess I was born to be your father, born to teach you love and happiness never faltering  but hoping you would carry my gift in your heart for eternity knowing that although my time on Earth was short I have not abandoned you, nor will I ever you are a part of me, the best part of me for there was never a father who loved his daughter more or who was as blessed as me

posted by poetjpb on February 23, 2005 at 9:59 PM | link to this | reply

So hauntingly lovely and strong Mia. Hope you are doing okay.

posted by katray4 on February 23, 2005 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

Mia--Beautiful. She was lucky to have him as a father and lucky to have

you as an aunt...

posted by Renigade on February 23, 2005 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply