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Glad I could help!  :-)

posted by roofpig on February 22, 2005 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

Yes dear, no worries!!! Love your dialogues!! VOYAGER9940

posted by Voyager9940 on February 22, 2005 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Roof
I totally 100% agree with you...I deleted the last line and feel much better about it...now it's a more solid read...many thanks!!!

posted by MiaElla on February 22, 2005 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Voyager
Glad to see you are still reading...

posted by MiaElla on February 22, 2005 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

I likes, I likes.

My only suggestion would be to strip away that very last sentence.  I think ending it on the smiles would be more effective.  But that's just one man's opinion!  :-)

posted by roofpig on February 22, 2005 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

Oh dear , I have been missing those, I was three chapters behind already, so I'm glad I could catch up now! Good job again there, I enjoy it!! Seeyou around!! VOYAGER9940

posted by Voyager9940 on February 22, 2005 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

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