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Thanks teddy for your kind words!

posted by Original_Influence on February 15, 2005 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

Some poems the reader can really feel....I felt this one...great work!   -Ted

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on February 14, 2005 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

so sad.........and I can relate in someway

posted by _Symphony_ on February 14, 2005 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

katray,
thanks...that means a lot coming from you.

posted by Original_Influence on February 13, 2005 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

Original

I like the flow of this. Sad truths yet expressed very nicely - short and bittersweet!

posted by Katray2 on February 13, 2005 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

mark the present, the here and the now -- the kingdom!

posted by kingmi on February 13, 2005 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

Original, Over the sea the sky is green. In KY the grass is blue.
The ticks of the clock park the present -- the here and the now!  The Kingdom!

posted by kingmi on February 13, 2005 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply