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Thanks teddy for your kind words!
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 15, 2005 at 4:16 AM
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Some poems the reader can really feel....I felt this one...great work!
-Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 14, 2005 at 10:57 PM
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so sad.........and I can relate in someway
posted by
_Symphony_
on February 14, 2005 at 5:24 AM
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katray,
thanks...that means a lot coming from you.
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 13, 2005 at 8:30 PM
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Original
I like the flow of this. Sad truths yet expressed very nicely - short and bittersweet!
posted by
Katray2
on February 13, 2005 at 8:22 PM
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mark the present, the here and the now -- the kingdom!
posted by
kingmi
on February 13, 2005 at 7:00 PM
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Original, Over the sea the sky is green. In KY the grass is blue.
The ticks of the clock park the present -- the here and the now! The Kingdom!
posted by
kingmi
on February 13, 2005 at 6:59 PM
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