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MiaElla,

By the way, I have finished reading your story and I thought it was very good.  I will post more specific thoughts soon.

posted by Dylan24 on February 22, 2005 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

DylanValente
Keep in mind this isn't a full/completed novel but a rough draft on one I'm going to write in the future...I only have a few minutes during the day to write, so it's the best I can do in several minutes....lol.

posted by MiaElla on February 11, 2005 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

I've printed out stories one through four and I'll read them with a cup of tea tonight.  I can offer some suggestions if you'd like; it's what I live for! 

posted by Dylan24 on February 11, 2005 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

Nice dialogues still Miaella!

posted by Voyager9940 on February 11, 2005 at 2:52 PM | link to this | reply

Gah, how did I miss the last update of this?  At least I'm caught up now!  (well, you had me caught at the beginning)  ;-)

posted by roofpig on February 11, 2005 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

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