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Beautiful hurt.
You have a fine poetic voice.  Hope writing it helped. 

posted by Witchflower on February 7, 2005 at 1:26 PM | link to this | reply

MiaElla - I think you said it all, in a sadly beautiful perfection.

posted by TAPS. on February 7, 2005 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply

MiaElla, you leave me breathless with the staccato imagery...

posted by void-is on February 7, 2005 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

the tone and time of mourning....

posted by scriber on February 7, 2005 at 10:09 AM | link to this | reply

I understand

posted by _Symphony_ on February 7, 2005 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

Painfully beautiful.

This gave me chills...

posted by RachelAnna on February 7, 2005 at 9:28 AM | link to this | reply