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- Go to Beat the Clock Round 3 Revised by Murphy's Rules "The Staircase"
Interesting story.
Ann.
posted by
A-and-B
on February 4, 2005 at 7:26 PM
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tiger, thank you for reading this poem and commenting. Means a lot!
posted by
kingmi
on January 29, 2005 at 12:05 AM
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Amazing!!!
Wow what a twist. You really take this piece in an unexpected direction. Good job.
posted by
tigerprincess
on January 28, 2005 at 11:08 PM
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Ciel, Much easier on the eyes after the revising!
posted by
kingmi
on January 23, 2005 at 7:13 PM
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I like this very much, Kingmi!
posted by
Ciel
on January 23, 2005 at 7:09 PM
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Sassy, Ah-hah. See? After the trimming it's easier to read!
posted by
kingmi
on January 23, 2005 at 3:22 PM
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This is good stuff
I like your style and the story kept me interested.
posted by
Sherri_G
on January 23, 2005 at 1:25 PM
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