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I missed reading you. truely, you work is wonderdul--
posted by
michael_pilarte
on February 5, 2005 at 1:11 AM
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JJ, ...thanks for reading...well...since I can't come up with anything......any title suggestions are appreciated ....either here or via email.
posted by
Julia.
on January 25, 2005 at 4:57 PM
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A title?
It really has haunting imagery, and a very compex, mixed-emotion feel. I like it very much, but blapping a title on it in a message board context is something that I think everyone here has sidestepped. I might get back and forth with you via email, but I'll leave it to you to yes/no that.
JJ
posted by
Jack_Flash
on January 25, 2005 at 4:53 PM
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Electric, what a nice gesture...however, I'm certain that if there were a chocolate sword icon, you would have left that for me instead!
posted by
Julia.
on January 24, 2005 at 1:25 PM
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Thanks Symphony!
posted by
Julia.
on January 24, 2005 at 11:33 AM
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posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 23, 2005 at 10:28 PM
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great work
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 23, 2005 at 11:23 AM
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haha...oh yeah...strawberries...and chocolate...yum.
posted by
Julia.
on January 22, 2005 at 9:06 PM
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quirky.......there is one thing...........you forgot ...
to add from your other blog...........the strawberries........whew that was hot hot hot........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 22, 2005 at 8:54 PM
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electric, thanks for reading both of them! I like this one better, too. Though, they could both be improved with chocolate...and swords...lol...
posted by
Julia.
on January 22, 2005 at 8:51 PM
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quirky.......
yes i like this better...........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 22, 2005 at 8:44 PM
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electric,
When I wrote it, I was just starting to write poetry, and as such, felt that it could now be improved. You can read the original version if you like:
The thrill is gone.
posted by
Julia.
on January 22, 2005 at 8:38 PM
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quirky.....if .you dont mind me asking...........
why did you change it........and do you still have the original listed on your blog somewhere?........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 22, 2005 at 8:30 PM
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electric, yes...you were not here in early November.
posted by
Julia.
on January 22, 2005 at 8:28 PM
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quirky...........that was very beautiful....and............
i missed the first version i believe........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 22, 2005 at 8:21 PM
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Ariala, thanks.
I think I AM learning bit by bit, aren't I??
posted by
Julia.
on January 22, 2005 at 8:16 PM
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Quirky, now that's what I'm talking about! Great improvement! Great job!
posted by
Ariala
on January 22, 2005 at 7:28 PM
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