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Quirky,.....thanks!
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 23, 2005 at 1:30 PM
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Nicely done..a melodic jaunt...and then...that last line is so totally unexpected!
posted by
Julia.
on January 23, 2005 at 12:59 PM
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great work
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 23, 2005 at 11:18 AM
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thanks Wiley!
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 22, 2005 at 8:49 PM
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ELA...thank you!
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 22, 2005 at 8:49 PM
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hello ..........original........yes the night.........
sky is preferred myself as it is so beautiful and if it is to sunny i cant even go outside due to a light sensitive eye condition called photophobia....very beautiful poem..........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 22, 2005 at 8:47 PM
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Original
Aw and I hope you get led out of the rat race to the peace luv. Well done
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 22, 2005 at 8:47 PM
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kingmi,
thanks...it is so peaceful at night...
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 22, 2005 at 3:59 PM
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Original Influence, I love this. I do it all the time. I can get lost in the night sky and reduce my stress level there. Great writing!
posted by
kingmi
on January 22, 2005 at 3:04 PM
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