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Quirky,.....thanks!

posted by Original_Influence on January 23, 2005 at 1:30 PM | link to this | reply

Nicely done..a melodic jaunt...and then...that last line is so totally unexpected!

posted by Julia. on January 23, 2005 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

great work

posted by _Symphony_ on January 23, 2005 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

thanks Wiley!

posted by Original_Influence on January 22, 2005 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

ELA...thank you!

posted by Original_Influence on January 22, 2005 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

hello ..........original........yes the night.........

sky is preferred myself as it is so beautiful and if it is to sunny i cant even go outside due to a light sensitive eye condition called photophobia....very beautiful poem..........

posted by electric_light_ambition on January 22, 2005 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

Original

Aw and I hope you get led out of the rat race to the peace luv. Well done

posted by WileyJohn on January 22, 2005 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

kingmi,

thanks...it is so peaceful at night...

posted by Original_Influence on January 22, 2005 at 3:59 PM | link to this | reply

Original Influence, I love this.  I do it all the time.  I can get lost in the night sky and reduce my stress level there.  Great writing!

posted by kingmi on January 22, 2005 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply