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Sweet Mia, every line absolutely weaving the reader

more tightly within the magic of your artistry...  -Ted

posted by teddypoet_ on January 24, 2005 at 4:50 PM | link to this | reply

I love it how

I could have no idea what you were writing about, but be completely in it. It's like poetic virtual reality :)

posted by marzieh on January 24, 2005 at 3:01 AM | link to this | reply

Miaella, great imagery. Wouldn't the world be cool if we could have that

tabula rasa thing a snow globe universe would bring

posted by FreeManWalking on January 23, 2005 at 1:55 AM | link to this | reply

mia.........this......was....very..........

beautiful ...........and i do sometimes miss.......... the snow covered scenery.......

posted by electric_light_ambition on January 22, 2005 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

I prefer walking on the

sun drenched beach, since I'm not a snow person, but the poem paints a lovely piture.

posted by Moondawg on January 22, 2005 at 4:31 PM | link to this | reply

beautifully written

posted by _Symphony_ on January 22, 2005 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

Miella, not always!

posted by kingmi on January 21, 2005 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

Very picturesque, MiaElla.   Laughing at Scriber's comment almost made me forget what I was going to say.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on January 21, 2005 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

Nice tongue action on the snow flake. --love scriber

posted by scriber on January 21, 2005 at 2:27 PM | link to this | reply

This is wonderful. I especially enjoyed the second and third stanzas. Your descriptions are impeccable.

posted by Passionflower on January 21, 2005 at 2:24 PM | link to this | reply