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Sweet Mia, every line absolutely weaving the reader
more tightly within the magic of your artistry...
-Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 24, 2005 at 4:50 PM
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I love it how
I could have no idea what you were writing about, but be completely in it. It's like poetic virtual reality :)
posted by
marzieh
on January 24, 2005 at 3:01 AM
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Miaella, great imagery. Wouldn't the world be cool if we could have that
tabula rasa thing a snow globe universe would bring
posted by
FreeManWalking
on January 23, 2005 at 1:55 AM
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mia.........this......was....very..........
beautiful ...........and i do sometimes miss.......... the snow covered scenery.......
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 22, 2005 at 9:40 PM
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I prefer walking on the
sun drenched beach, since I'm not a snow person, but the poem paints a lovely piture.
posted by
Moondawg
on January 22, 2005 at 4:31 PM
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beautifully written
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 22, 2005 at 8:00 AM
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Miella, not always!
posted by
kingmi
on January 21, 2005 at 9:51 PM
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Very picturesque, MiaElla. Laughing at Scriber's comment almost made me forget what I was going to say. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
on January 21, 2005 at 7:48 PM
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Nice tongue action on the snow flake. --love scriber
posted by
scriber
on January 21, 2005 at 2:27 PM
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This is wonderful. I especially enjoyed the second and third stanzas. Your descriptions are impeccable.
posted by
Passionflower
on January 21, 2005 at 2:24 PM
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