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katray - thank you for such lovely comments!

posted by Ca88andra on January 19, 2005 at 3:18 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely and thought inducing. Going against the tide becomes exhausting after awhile. Excellent poem Ca88andra.

posted by PoetRaye on January 18, 2005 at 6:11 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Voyager!

posted by Ca88andra on January 18, 2005 at 6:07 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88andra, this is beautiful! Loved it!

Voyager9940

posted by Voyager9940 on January 18, 2005 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

littlems - I've promised myself that one day I will visit Darwin. I've heard so much about it. And you can have the weather down here, its far too cold for me!

posted by Ca88andra on January 17, 2005 at 2:26 AM | link to this | reply

Ca88andra

I'll make you a deal - you can envy me for the waves and I'll envy you for the temperature down there. It is sticky and hot and humid, I can feel the sweat trickling down the back of my legs and it is 7.30 in the evening! LOL - Still, I love Darwin!

posted by littlemspickles on January 17, 2005 at 2:01 AM | link to this | reply

littlems - I'm envious. I would love to be listening to the waves on the beach right now.

posted by Ca88andra on January 17, 2005 at 1:45 AM | link to this | reply

what a beautiful poem to read

as I listen to the waves lapping on the beach just down the road from where I live.

posted by littlemspickles on January 17, 2005 at 1:24 AM | link to this | reply

sheilake - I hope you didn't get sea sick!

posted by Ca88andra on January 15, 2005 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

I felt the motion here.  The word ocean ended it perfectly.

posted by sheilake on January 15, 2005 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

Hey sue! I'm rockin...

posted by Ca88andra on January 15, 2005 at 3:54 AM | link to this | reply

hellocassandra........rock on.

posted by 9STAR on January 13, 2005 at 6:54 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Jim!

posted by Ca88andra on January 13, 2005 at 1:44 PM | link to this | reply

LOVE IT! :-)

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on January 13, 2005 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky - thank you!

posted by Ca88andra on January 13, 2005 at 3:32 AM | link to this | reply

Ca88, very creative; a most enjoyable read.....I liked this esp.:

Even in repose I ripple,

posted by Julia. on January 12, 2005 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you void - exactly what I was hoping to convey.

posted by Ca88andra on January 12, 2005 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88- Excellent images! A poem of surrender, to the oneness...

posted by void-is on January 12, 2005 at 2:35 PM | link to this | reply

beezus - thank you for the comment!

posted by Ca88andra on January 12, 2005 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

i like this

esp/. the second stanza.  good imagery.

posted by beezus on January 12, 2005 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

Yea!!!! I am a tadpole....I guess that means

I don't have to go to work anymore, right???

posted by Original_Influence on January 11, 2005 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply

lol Tapsel - you are very amusing!

posted by Ca88andra on January 11, 2005 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

Original obviously you must be a tadpole if you have red hair....

posted by Ca88andra on January 11, 2005 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

Moondawg - well, I never did like school anyway.... lol!

posted by Ca88andra on January 11, 2005 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

lololol...this is the second out loud laugh of my day...thank you!

posted by Original_Influence on January 11, 2005 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

Only if you are going acourtin'......Uh-Huh.

posted by TAPS. on January 11, 2005 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

Gee Taps....do I need a new wardrobe too!

posted by Original_Influence on January 11, 2005 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

Watch out, Original - you are gonna start turning green.

posted by TAPS. on January 11, 2005 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply

Red-headed Tadpole in a fishin' hole
He couldn't croak or jump to save his soul!
But then one day, it was the funniest thing!
Why, he started growin'!
And turnin' green!

posted by TAPS. on January 11, 2005 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

Wait...tadpoles have red hair....am I a tadpole?

Is that what's wrong????

posted by Original_Influence on January 11, 2005 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

Don't just be a part of the

school drifitng along. Be like the whale and make big splashes.

posted by Moondawg on January 11, 2005 at 6:41 PM | link to this | reply

LMAO!

posted by Ca88andra on January 11, 2005 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88 - I don't know, but they have red hair and they are cute.   LOL

posted by TAPS. on January 11, 2005 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply

Tapsel - thanks for the image.... hmmm what noise do tadpoles make?

posted by Ca88andra on January 11, 2005 at 3:35 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88andra - What a cute, neat poem.   I will forever now think of you as a confined tadpole.   LOL

posted by TAPS. on January 11, 2005 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

Mia - thank you for the lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed it.

posted by Ca88andra on January 11, 2005 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Symphony!

posted by Ca88andra on January 11, 2005 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

Ca88andra,

Funny you should mention rhythm in this poem, this poem has rhythm. It flows so nice and free. It's as if the poem itself is alive...simply beautiful.

posted by MiaElla on January 11, 2005 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

excellent poem....I can realte too

posted by _Symphony_ on January 11, 2005 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply