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Dear Miaella and Roofpig... forgot to mention that I read about 8 chapters of the Lion too... but I like Margareta that little more!

See/hear/read ya around!!

Voyager9940

posted by Voyager9940 on January 12, 2005 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

roof,

You can be the only reader of the Lion's Den.....hehe.

But don't worry, my newfound popularity will soon fade...and it will just be you again...lol.

posted by MiaElla on January 12, 2005 at 10:47 AM | link to this | reply

See Mia, you got other readers now!

Of course, I don't feel special anymore because the delusion of being your only reader has fled... :::sigh:::

But I'll live.  :-)

posted by roofpig on January 12, 2005 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Miaella, your style has a difference... and that attrcted me, I'm sure there are others as well!! Like I said, healthy jealous, mostly on your dialogues, and I mean that.

Voyager9940

posted by Voyager9940 on January 12, 2005 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Voyager,

Thnaks, for a while there I thought no one was reading this.

posted by MiaElla on January 12, 2005 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

kingmi

Of course, doesn't every presidential election start out like this...hehe.

posted by MiaElla on January 12, 2005 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Miaella, nice stories there, good dialogues and length. Getting healthy jealous here!! Smile!

Voyager9940

posted by Voyager9940 on January 12, 2005 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

Mia, I read very quickly, was this about the presidential election?

posted by kingmi on January 10, 2005 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

:-)

posted by roofpig on January 10, 2005 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

passion,

I tend to do that a lot in my writing...I often switch back and forth in the same piece...it's like a monster I can't control...haha...comes from reading too many chik-lit novels, most of which are written in the present tense.

posted by MiaElla on January 10, 2005 at 1:04 PM | link to this | reply

This is good dialogue but why are you writing it in the present tense? That feels wrong.

posted by Passionflower on January 10, 2005 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply