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MiaEllen--We live in myths to be. nicely done, love scriber

posted by scriber on January 7, 2005 at 12:20 PM | link to this | reply

MiaElla- Wonderful! By the muse touched...

posted by void-is on January 7, 2005 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Mia, I agree with Taps, you should definitely be doing the poetry challenge.

This was rich with imagery, well done!

posted by Julia. on January 7, 2005 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

englishwoman,

Thank you

I have yet to read you. I think I will do so now.

posted by MiaElla on January 7, 2005 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

That is beautiful

posted by englishwoman on January 7, 2005 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

MiaElla - I'm afraid you protest too much.   Give it a try.

posted by TAPS. on January 7, 2005 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

passion,

Thanks

posted by MiaElla on January 7, 2005 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Tapsel,

I thought about it but those poems are just too good.

posted by MiaElla on January 7, 2005 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

Mia::::This is wonderful. I had a full sense of the sea--the way it feels and smells, the sounds. My fav line is: sung among the city of coral

posted by Passionflower on January 7, 2005 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

MiaElla, you ought to "flip tail and swim" over to Gheeghee's poetry contest and enter the third round.  Its lots of fun.

posted by TAPS. on January 7, 2005 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply