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Amazing read and write love each section and point was crossed. Awsome!
Can I share a post Seeds 3rd poem 3rd page i'll continue to read thank you.

posted by Mystereo on January 18, 2009 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

Regarding your question abour migraines
Sorry to respond to you in your comments, but I don't know how the blogit e-mail thing works.  Anyway, while emotional stressors and feelings of anxiety can bring out migraines, they are a very real phenomenon.  The prevailing theory is one of neurovascular dysregulation, in which the nervous system control of the blood flow to the brain is faulty.  Not that this would cause strokes, but instead, certain areas of the brain get engorged with blood.  Since the skull cannot expand to accomodate this increased blood volume, the resultant pressure build-up causes an intense pain.

posted by Dean_G_M.D. on January 10, 2005 at 4:58 AM | link to this | reply

Straightforward...
Good Job!

posted by A_Norseman on January 7, 2005 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

Very cool and unique...I like!

posted by Ariala on January 7, 2005 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Nice work!  I enjoyed reading all of your poems!  I'm curious .. do you care to reveal what "forgotten land" you're refering to?  It seems like it could be Israel, or Palestine .. or, maybe, rural Nebraska? 

posted by Georgia on January 6, 2005 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

I agree, Gheeghee has a great blog.
And your poetry really rocks, too, Straight! You have a style and tone all your own!

posted by KlaraRoberts on January 6, 2005 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply

straightforward,

These were very interesting, almost a stream-of-consciousness style.

posted by Julia. on January 6, 2005 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

straightforward....that was a very.........................................
original poem....i liked the way your poem was structured and it brought many images to the mind..........

posted by electric_light_ambition on January 6, 2005 at 1:26 PM | link to this | reply

wow.....

posted by Star5_ on January 6, 2005 at 1:15 AM | link to this | reply

The mind is the most powerful

 tool when properly used.

Good poem.

Ann.

posted by A-and-B on January 6, 2005 at 1:04 AM | link to this | reply

A diversity of thoughts in your poems.

Thanks for your contribution to my

Tandem Poetry Writing Blog.

It has been updated.

Ben

posted by A-and-B on January 4, 2005 at 11:36 PM | link to this | reply