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electric,
It's a grand plan save for one teeny-tiny little lilliputian miniature diminutive detail..............we don't know who "they" are!!
posted by
Julia.
on January 6, 2005 at 10:17 PM
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quirky.....lets go.......get them now...........you can ...................
start by telling them all kind words,.......then we will surprise them........i want you to think about any wrong any.......guy has ever done you............then......boy oh boy..........will they be in trouble........giggle.......then .we will quietly walk away holding hands......lol......
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 6, 2005 at 10:09 PM
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Electric,
I've a better idea...you hold them down while I beat them with powerfully wielded words until they cry "uncle!"
posted by
Julia.
on January 6, 2005 at 9:57 PM
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quirky.....lets go get them now........(((quirky)))))))).and i will .......
hold them down while you beat them with sticks and stones.........lmfao...............hheeeeeeeeeeee...........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 6, 2005 at 9:35 PM
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Georgia,
Yeah, shame on 'em! Thanks for reading.
posted by
Julia.
on January 6, 2005 at 9:28 PM
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MerryA and OI, thanks for reading my submission!
posted by
Julia.
on January 6, 2005 at 9:27 PM
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Electric,
that's an excellent idea, whoever made that up didn't know what they were talking about, did they?
posted by
Julia.
on January 6, 2005 at 9:26 PM
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I'm glad you haven't stopped embracing the fertile palette of life! You do it so well through your poetry. And shame on the schmuck who inspired this poem!
posted by
Georgia
on January 6, 2005 at 4:47 PM
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Very intense!
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 6, 2005 at 3:54 PM
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Wow Quirky
Intense.... I like it!
posted by
MerryAnne
on January 6, 2005 at 2:18 PM
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hi quirky...how bout u and i go kick the ass of the person who.............
wrote the saying.........sticks and stones will break my bones.......but names will never hurt me...........you did a great job with this poem.........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 6, 2005 at 2:03 PM
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thanks red!
posted by
Julia.
on January 5, 2005 at 4:13 PM
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quirk,
aptly choice of words....flows nicely....
red
posted by
redlunar
on January 5, 2005 at 3:38 PM
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u are always welcome, it's my pleasure to read you.
posted by
Star5_
on January 5, 2005 at 7:55 AM
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thanks Sue!
posted by
Julia.
on January 5, 2005 at 7:53 AM
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great writing
posted by
Star5_
on January 4, 2005 at 10:00 PM
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Katray,
Thanks for reading!
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 9:57 PM
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Wow, incredible Quirky.
posted by
Katray2
on January 4, 2005 at 9:44 PM
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thank you Lady
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 8:53 PM
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quirky
that was an amazing poem. I really liked it
posted by
ladyofshalott
on January 4, 2005 at 6:52 PM
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GG,
Yeah I guess you are right, the ultimate aim is to elicit emotion, right?
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 5:30 PM
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quirk...i'd take the wincing and turning away as a compliment.
I've had people say the same about some of my poems, and that's what I was going for. good job with this
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 4, 2005 at 5:18 PM
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Alf,
Three "greats" from you, a poetry whiz...........now that is GREAT!
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 4:48 PM
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Taps,
I don't know---wincing and wanting to turn away can't be good can it??
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 4:47 PM
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Quirky...
A great message here, as told by one that has learned it. Great imagry and structure throughout. Great job...well done...
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 4, 2005 at 4:42 PM
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Quirky - almost too visual. It made me wince and want to turn away. I guess that makes it good.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 4, 2005 at 3:46 PM
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GG,
Thanks for the clarification.
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 11:26 AM
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Quirk...I meant, you posted this with confidence
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 4, 2005 at 10:50 AM
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Symphony--and ditto for your second comment...lol.
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 10:39 AM
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Symphony, thanks very much!
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 10:39 AM
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wow...now this is really good.......the imagary
the emotion wow......well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 4, 2005 at 10:20 AM
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wow...now this is really good.......the imagary
the emotion wow......well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 4, 2005 at 10:20 AM
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GG, thanks,
that's great! Re: your second comment, you mean my "writing voice?"
posted by
Julia.
on January 4, 2005 at 10:18 AM
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and here, I hear your voice.
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 4, 2005 at 10:14 AM
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Quirky...I could hear the crackling of the fire~the harshness...the popping
even the occasional "whooosshhhh" in your vowels. Excellent imagery here.
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 4, 2005 at 10:13 AM
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