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hello alf norseman..............................
for now.......time is on your side...........thanks for sharing your time with us with your poetry...........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on January 6, 2005 at 1:41 PM
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Gheeghee, Merryanne, Klara, Tapsel and Georgia....
Thank you all for your kind comments.
Flowers for everyone.
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 4, 2005 at 4:37 PM
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Beezus...
Thanks for reading!
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 4, 2005 at 4:35 PM
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Another thoughtful poem, Alf! I like the "husk" metaphor. It's the age-old question: Do we enter Heaven by husk or by kernel?
posted by
Georgia
on January 2, 2005 at 5:26 PM
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Alf, you are so good at this. This is a great poem for the start of the new year.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 1, 2005 at 6:43 PM
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I agree with Merry, Alf. You were missed and now you've come back
with work that's stronger even and better, if that's possible. A great read, Alf. Somewhat sad for me, but still it stirred me.
posted by
KlaraRoberts
on January 1, 2005 at 11:52 AM
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Alf,
glad to see you back - I was thinking of sending out a search party. I see that your art has not suffered in your absence, another fantastic poem.
posted by
MerryAnne
on January 1, 2005 at 11:48 AM
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GG,
Thanks. Having a funnycide never killed anyone...hehe.
posted by
Julia.
on January 1, 2005 at 11:02 AM
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Quirk, you are just a riot...Yes, A, this is great.
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 1, 2005 at 10:55 AM
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i was
just thinking about the nature of time this week. life must feel like an eternity when you are suffering losses like those in the tsunami.
posted by
beezus
on December 31, 2004 at 8:24 PM
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Quirky...
Well good golly!!! WOW back at 'cha! And thank you very much!
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 31, 2004 at 4:01 PM
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Wow...Wow...Wow!! This poem knocked my socks off
(and I wasn't even wearing them at the time!). It's a three-wow entry.
posted by
Julia.
on December 31, 2004 at 3:59 PM
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Thanks symphony :)
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 31, 2004 at 3:22 PM
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excellent poem...you are so good at this
very deep and powerful...well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on December 31, 2004 at 3:09 PM
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