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eeek.

posted by Gheeghee on December 29, 2004 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

wow......you have such a way with words

posted by _Symphony_ on December 29, 2004 at 11:13 AM | link to this | reply

A coffin of Alepo pine...MiaElla, you never cease to amaze me...

posted by void-is on December 29, 2004 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

Frakenkitty,
I just get in really dark moods sometimes...usually at times when things would seem happiest for me...I just go with it though...I write my best when I'm this way...when I'm happy it's all "roses are red and violets are blue"...lol

posted by MiaElla on December 29, 2004 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

billy cargo
It is one of "supposed" pines that made Jesus's cross....no one seems to be able to agree on the wood though....but it was the best sounding for my poem, so it's the one I went with...hehe...your stories are so great...makes me wish I was a fly on the wall sometimes...

posted by MiaElla on December 29, 2004 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

Miaella, your use of wood amazes me...just last week at a "nice"
restaurant in Keflavik my little table of junior officers noticed the ambassador, the prime minister and a few others were eating at a table near by.  I was telling my table about a book I saw in Ecuador called Yo Clitoris and suddenly everyone started spouting off sex words.  Finally Brett, a botany grad student, began his rampage on the misunderstood pronunciation of Pinus species and I'm pretty sure he named the one you chose for your coffin. Anyhoo, I'm not sure what impression we made on the dignitaries.

posted by FreeManWalking on December 29, 2004 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

Does the winter bring you
these dark thoughts?  Very powerful poem, you are so talented.  Take care MiaElla 

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on December 29, 2004 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

holy creation...very creative...love scriber

posted by scriber on December 29, 2004 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply