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Thanks Norseman!

posted by Julia. on December 30, 2004 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

electric,
that would be very nice, indeed!

posted by Julia. on December 30, 2004 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

Quirky...
A wonderful poem, with a good ending. 

posted by A_Norseman on December 30, 2004 at 4:33 PM | link to this | reply

may he ...........have a giant.............................................
heart that blankets your toes and warms you .......throughout your being............

posted by electric_light_ambition on December 30, 2004 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply

electric,
yes to both of those! ;-)

posted by Julia. on December 30, 2004 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

i saw ghee ghee is posting the new words tomorrow..
so i will be trying her contest soon....may you find a gentleman to warm your cold toes for you...............

posted by electric_light_ambition on December 30, 2004 at 1:41 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Original I,

posted by Julia. on December 30, 2004 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

electric...it's frigid, hehe.
You really should enter a poem next time!

posted by Julia. on December 30, 2004 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

very, very good.

posted by Original_Influence on December 30, 2004 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....................................
that water sounds cold..........very creative poem quirky..........i want to try ghee ghees contest soon...........

posted by electric_light_ambition on December 29, 2004 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

Georgia, thanks!

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

Moondawg,

Hey, it's just a poem, it's not like I'm going to run out and drown myself or anything!! But thank you very much for your nice compliment.

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

Totally agree with Moondawg. Besides, you do have talent!  Keep writing! 

posted by Georgia on December 29, 2004 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem
but it's not worth giving yourself up to the frigid sea over some guy. It seems that you should have taken an interest in this poetry gig earlier your quite good at it.

posted by Moondawg on December 29, 2004 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Symphony!

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

this is excellent
I have read yours and taspels entries and your both fantastic.....well done

posted by _Symphony_ on December 29, 2004 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

kelli,
I've read all the other submissions too, and thought the same thing...even with many common words, they are all so diverse!

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

katray,
thanks for the lovely compliment---and I have to say thank you also for awakening my interest in poetry...it was your poetry that I started to read first...and now I love writing it, too!

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky!  Just caught yours, Very nice, it's interesting to see the difference in subject!

posted by Kelli on December 29, 2004 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

Taps,
Thanks for reading my poem today!

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, awesome poem Quirky. Well done!

posted by Katray2 on December 29, 2004 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

GGG, thanks.
"Moving" is good, right? Even with a sigh?

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky - great job.  I can feel your longing and pain.

posted by TAPS. on December 29, 2004 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Gypsy!

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

Quirk...wow. This is VERY heartfelt...moving...*sigh.*

posted by Gheeghee on December 29, 2004 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky...
Great job! I like this entry...

posted by RedHeadedGypsy on December 29, 2004 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply