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Alf,
So I should add...very astute observation you have made!!
posted by
Julia.
on December 22, 2004 at 2:10 PM
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Alf,
This is an adaptation from a screenplay opening scene.
posted by
Julia.
on December 22, 2004 at 2:10 PM
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Quirky...
I was caught up in this one...like watching a movie. What inspired this?
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 22, 2004 at 11:19 AM
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Thank you Original!
posted by
Julia.
on December 21, 2004 at 9:25 PM
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well done! Dark images!
posted by
Original_Influence
on December 21, 2004 at 6:23 PM
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Thanks for reading Ariala,
and glad you liked it!
posted by
Julia.
on December 21, 2004 at 2:23 PM
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Quirky, excellent poem! It's so descriptive, alive and breathing!
posted by
Ariala
on December 21, 2004 at 12:33 PM
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Vibrance,
I think you mis-read the poem...it was not about a killer, unless you count nature's heinous acts...it was a tornado.
posted by
Julia.
on December 21, 2004 at 11:49 AM
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Sym, thanks.
Sometimes the brush strokes are a little haphazard, but I'm trying, lol.
posted by
Julia.
on December 21, 2004 at 11:42 AM
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I'm back...with all my might.
You think writing about looking for a killer is lovely?. LOL. you and I are on the same wavelenght...read my post from yesterday. Love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
on December 21, 2004 at 11:38 AM
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great poem ...you paint pictures with your words
......take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on December 21, 2004 at 11:35 AM
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