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Mike love, it oozes sadness, and the ending - ouch.
Two thumbs up darlin'.
posted by
poetkitty
on November 30, 2004 at 8:54 AM
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Mike
Very sad my friend, well done
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 29, 2004 at 8:20 AM
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Mike - this is sad but oh so often true. Good writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 29, 2004 at 8:00 AM
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this is so very sad, but beautifully written.... these lines were amazing
And a tear is rolling down
breaking the skin of my cheek;
hurting for the thought of loosing you
but is a tear you'll never see. 
posted by
Tanoolicious
on November 29, 2004 at 2:49 AM
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