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nice haiku

Kathy

posted by Maryka77 on April 25, 2009 at 4:27 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Saul. It's all relative I guess.

posted by Tremac on November 22, 2004 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

I love this haiku...excellent

posted by saul_relative on November 21, 2004 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

Hey, Kingmi. Thanks.

posted by Tremac on November 21, 2004 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

Trems, Oh Yes!

posted by kingmi on November 21, 2004 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

Tapsel-T... who says it's a bad thing?

posted by Tremac on November 21, 2004 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

To each it's own I guess, HolyG. Woo Hoo for the productive ones.

posted by Tremac on November 21, 2004 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc - That's me a lot. Worse the older I get.

posted by TAPS. on November 21, 2004 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

The tangents I go off on generally don't make for the most productive journeys, but sometimes they do!

posted by Holy_Grail on November 21, 2004 at 3:19 PM | link to this | reply

Beachbelle, I think there is pleasure in reaching the destination,

but also in the journey.

posted by Tremac on November 21, 2004 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

Sym, I believe so.  Change is good.   For every loss there is a gain and vice versa.

posted by Tremac on November 21, 2004 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

The trouble is working out which tangents become the real route

posted by beachbelle on November 21, 2004 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

yes very true

I am changing direction......hopfully for the better

posted by _Symphony_ on November 21, 2004 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

LOL.

posted by Tremac on November 21, 2004 at 11:38 AM | link to this | reply

ooooh good!!! I didnt because they got tangled up with my sheets  

posted by Tanoolicious on November 21, 2004 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

Hey, Tanoo! Oh, girl. I slept with them on.

posted by Tremac on November 21, 2004 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

oh yes, definately changing direction.  Tremacc by the way im still wearing the hiking boots... y'know to keep going on and stuff... what about you?

posted by Tanoolicious on November 21, 2004 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply