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ANGELZ MIND, LOL!!! Silly.

FRUIT-ION.   Fruit Ion?  Ionic fruit, maybe?  

posted by Tremac on November 17, 2004 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

DAmn this is a mornig of fruitness .. hahahaah .. every where i look everything i think .. it all has fruit in it.. somewhere!!! omgAWDDD

posted by ANGELZ_MIND on November 17, 2004 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Hi, Beachbelle. Nice of you to drop by. Thank you for commenting.

posted by Tremac on November 17, 2004 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting

posted by beachbelle on November 17, 2004 at 1:59 AM | link to this | reply

LOL, HolyG-- Your thumbs up is enough for me.

Thanks.

posted by Tremac on November 16, 2004 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

Kingmi, thanks for your haiku. Love can be a dance of hope!

posted by Tremac on November 16, 2004 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Well I feel like I should add something meaningful here, but I got nothin!  I liked it.

posted by Holy_Grail on November 16, 2004 at 6:18 PM | link to this | reply

Trems,

Love, the dance of hope

Consumes every waking hour

-- And disappointment.

posted by kingmi on November 16, 2004 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

**hears the music and begins to dance** Thanks, Tanoo.

You are always so upbeat.

posted by Tremac on November 16, 2004 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

  **Sways around to music**  gorgeous

posted by Tanoolicious on November 16, 2004 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Sym. Very cool-- much appreciated.

posted by Tremac on November 16, 2004 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

David--

posted by Tremac on November 16, 2004 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

I agree.

well done..............take care

posted by _Symphony_ on November 16, 2004 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Of course I get you; something about being on the same wavelength!

posted by David1Spirit on November 16, 2004 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

Exactly, David. Thanks for adding that and for getting me.

A straight line to move forward, never to conform.

posted by Tremac on November 16, 2004 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

A straight line yes!

To the future, I will walk a straight line;  but never to conform!

posted by David1Spirit on November 16, 2004 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply