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Oh Frankenkitty, I used to be in marching band.
Sometimes I go there... to the syncopated beats and rhythm in my mind...   .   Thanks for reading.

posted by Tremac on November 10, 2004 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

Kingmi, lol.

 

posted by Tremac on November 10, 2004 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Spitfire. I appreciate your visit and your comments.

posted by Tremac on November 10, 2004 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

Syncopated. I am sorry,
but I don't have a dictionary with me. Wow Tremacc, I was stumped on the first three syllables.

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on November 10, 2004 at 6:24 AM | link to this | reply

trems, lol!

divine elixer

harvested by Juan Valdez

should be illegal!

posted by kingmi on November 10, 2004 at 5:16 AM | link to this | reply

I really like these, especially this one.
 Keep them up. They're very nice!! (Ya know, I don't want to name names, but I think the title of this blog is a good one and hopefully, another blogger who posts "haikus" will understand what a haiku is.)

posted by SpitFire70 on November 9, 2004 at 11:57 PM | link to this | reply

Kingmi, hee haw...

in deified guise

high on the nector of gods

--- we play our heart strings...

posted by Tremac on November 9, 2004 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks HolyG

posted by Tremac on November 9, 2004 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc -- I get it now.

Anthropomorphic

plektrum-initiated

coffee bean rhythm

 

Yee-HAW!!

 

posted by kingmi on November 9, 2004 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

a nice buzz and rhythm! 

posted by Holy_Grail on November 9, 2004 at 4:33 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Sym, you too.

posted by Tremac on November 9, 2004 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you for being so straight forward, Straightforward.
  Please come again.

posted by Tremac on November 9, 2004 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

great as always
have a wonderful day.................take care

posted by _Symphony_ on November 9, 2004 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting
Interesting this three unrhymed-line form

posted by Straightforward on November 9, 2004 at 6:55 AM | link to this | reply

Hello, Tanoo. Thank you.
And today, I begin a new page...

posted by Tremac on November 9, 2004 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Yeah Scribey, right there-- within the thoughts and rhythms...

posted by Tremac on November 9, 2004 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

Wow Tremacc....

posted by Tanoolicious on November 9, 2004 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

Tremacc--i right in there somewhere...

posted by scriber on November 9, 2004 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

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