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Great haiku, Kelli. My thought is that when helping others

one doesn't have room to feel sorry for self.   Don't stop believing in you.

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

I replenish my

outlook and low self-esteem

by helping others 

posted by Kelli on November 6, 2004 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Beachbelle, lol.

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc, Yeah I know
-- scratches head;-)

posted by beachbelle on November 6, 2004 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

Beachbelle, I had sympathizing, relating in mind.

Commiserating has five syllables.   Commiserations sounded better to me.   That was my process.  

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Absolutely so
although I don't quite understand the commiserations

posted by beachbelle on November 6, 2004 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

HolyG, wouldn't that be nice?

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 6:52 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, David. Much appreciated.

Yes, you have been scarce, buddy!  You are missed.

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply

Wow tremacc, that's really waht it's all about, huh?

posted by Holy_Grail on November 6, 2004 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Although I am not posting much these days, I still come here almost everyday to get my Haiku fix!

posted by David1Spirit on November 6, 2004 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

Tanoo--

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

Yup I made her do it!! My bad hehehehe!!! ***Grabs extra large pink mop to clean mess***

posted by Tanoolicious on November 6, 2004 at 1:26 PM | link to this | reply

Oh yeah, vice versa I mean. You made her... lol

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 1:23 PM | link to this | reply

lol............yep it was me

whoops

posted by _Symphony_ on November 6, 2004 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

She did it! hehehehe  

posted by Tanoolicious on November 6, 2004 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

Oh-- MY BAD. I thought Sym made you spew what you were drinking
all over the keyboard...

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 1:06 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc... we aint drinking nothin!!!  *hic*       glad you arent upset with us  

 

Symph, laptops suck!  My old one died without any previous symptoms, and this one is crazie already!

posted by Tanoolicious on November 6, 2004 at 1:01 PM | link to this | reply

Hello, Kingmi... great stuff! Thank you much.

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

LOL! YOU TWO ARE SO FUNNY. Luckily, I am not drinking anything.
No worries, Tanoo...  no worries, Sym...

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc,

I, looking forward,

Invest in a new future

Conjoined --peace and hope!

posted by kingmi on November 6, 2004 at 12:49 PM | link to this | reply

Tanoolicious

lol...........yes I agree..........sorry tremacc to spoil it ........we need some candles here to bring that lovingly atmosphere back again

hang on............... Candle.........Hmmmm not very pretty...............maybe love would be better

hang on  Morphing Heart  Balloon Heart  Heart In Hand 

 





I wish I had a laptop........least my ass would not feel so numb on this stupid plastic chair.........yeah I know nothing to do with it..........

posted by _Symphony_ on November 6, 2004 at 12:49 PM | link to this | reply

**FALLS OVER** HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!    I did that the other day on my new laptop!!

Tremacc we ruined your beautiful haiku atmosphere.... 

**runs and grabs silk sacrves and lamps**

OoOoOh pretty 

Much better

posted by Tanoolicious on November 6, 2004 at 12:44 PM | link to this | reply

HA! TOO FUNNY! LOL!

 

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

THANKS SYMPHONY, LOL.

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 12:41 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Tanoo!

posted by Tremac on November 6, 2004 at 12:40 PM | link to this | reply

ROFL TANOO

I was drinking a drink and saw this comment come up in the comment section thingy.....you made me spit my drink out all over my keyboard... I had to take a minute to clean it before it became sticky..........lol

 Laugh  Laughing 1  Laughing 1  Laughing 2  So Funny It Hurts  Too Funny 





posted by _Symphony_ on November 6, 2004 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

LOL i meant "here" and not "her"   sheesh! 

posted by Tanoolicious on November 6, 2004 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

**grabs Symphy and runs back out**

*runs back in*   

we got her together!

posted by Tanoolicious on November 6, 2004 at 12:36 PM | link to this | reply

damn it!!!.......... tanoo...I wanted to be here first
 Sad 





great as always tremacc......................have a nice day.....take care

posted by _Symphony_ on November 6, 2004 at 12:34 PM | link to this | reply

**runs in**

I love it Tremacc 

posted by Tanoolicious on November 6, 2004 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply

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