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Thanks for reading a__word...

posted by Ca88andra on June 16, 2005 at 2:02 AM | link to this | reply

The abyss your words protray lives in us all.  Reach out as all of us do and keep your dreams alive.

posted by a_word_or2 on June 12, 2005 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

No, Frankenkitty I'm not sad. This was written a while ago. Thanks for reading.

posted by Ca88andra on November 28, 2004 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

Safety. Ca88andra,
this is a sad poem. Very lovely:) I hope you are not so sad.

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on November 28, 2004 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

lol canine - I rarely do choose safety...lol! Thanks...

posted by Ca88andra on November 21, 2004 at 2:45 AM | link to this | reply

Klara - I'm blushing... thank you!

posted by Ca88andra on November 21, 2004 at 2:44 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much Quirky!

posted by Ca88andra on November 21, 2004 at 2:44 AM | link to this | reply

Ca88
Never choose safety. ssshhhh, don't tell them that I said that. Great work.

posted by canine277 on November 19, 2004 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Incredible, incredible work, CA.
I'm frightfully jealous.

posted by KlaraRoberts on November 17, 2004 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

CA88,
I was drawn to come back for a second read also, and liked it just as much this time around. Awesome poem.

posted by Julia. on November 17, 2004 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Well thank you Sky!

posted by Ca88andra on November 13, 2004 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

yes, i loved your poem so much.....

posted by Super_Sonic on November 13, 2004 at 9:59 PM | link to this | reply

Sky - that makes three times! I'm impressed and honored indeed!

posted by Ca88andra on November 13, 2004 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

this is awesome and i came back to read again........

posted by Super_Sonic on November 13, 2004 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Tapsel!

posted by Ca88andra on November 13, 2004 at 8:09 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem Ca88andra.

posted by TAPS. on November 13, 2004 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Sky - I'm honored!

posted by Ca88andra on November 12, 2004 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

But I am frozen on the edge.......that line brought me back to read again.

posted by Super_Sonic on November 12, 2004 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Sky.

posted by Ca88andra on November 11, 2004 at 2:11 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful expressions

posted by Super_Sonic on November 10, 2004 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you wanna!

posted by Ca88andra on November 10, 2004 at 5:03 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!!
Wonderful expression!!

posted by wannabejew on November 10, 2004 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Melodystar!

posted by Ca88andra on November 9, 2004 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

Angelz I guess we don't know until we choose!

posted by Ca88andra on November 9, 2004 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

Great Poem!

posted by Melodystar on November 9, 2004 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

Ca88andra~~~
 Coices oh choices.. may we choose the right one .

posted by ANGELZ_MIND on November 9, 2004 at 8:35 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Witchflower!

posted by Ca88andra on November 9, 2004 at 2:07 AM | link to this | reply

I love the feeling this poem evokes.  Excellent! 

posted by Witchflower on November 8, 2004 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Brimstone - glad you enjoyed it.

posted by Ca88andra on November 8, 2004 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

A great poem about a fear we have in common - CHOICES.

Great job!

posted by bwFrampton on November 8, 2004 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Quirky, it was written at a time I thought I could grab that hand. But that hand left and I guess I discovered I can only rely on myself...

posted by Ca88andra on November 8, 2004 at 2:07 AM | link to this | reply

ca88,
very poetically suspenseful! I hope you can always reach out and grab the hand.

posted by Julia. on November 7, 2004 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Symphony - I'm fine. I wrote this awhile ago.

posted by Ca88andra on November 7, 2004 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

wow

this is so well written

I hope you are ok....

posted by _Symphony_ on November 6, 2004 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

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