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David, while I have the utmost respect for it---

I don't want to go that route as of yet-- never say never, though.   Thanks for the suggestion.

posted by Tremac on November 2, 2004 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply

do like Rachel did

Start your own ebook online. You never know where it will lead to.  

And you know there will be some bloggers buying it!

posted by David1Spirit on November 2, 2004 at 2:07 PM | link to this | reply

David, that's right keep on me about it. I will get to it for sure.

posted by Tremac on November 2, 2004 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

 

Now what's the story on that book?

posted by David1Spirit on November 2, 2004 at 1:52 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks HolyG, much appreciated.

 (and I gotcha).

posted by Tremac on November 1, 2004 at 12:45 PM | link to this | reply

That's a great summation, Incubus and thank you...

posted by Tremac on November 1, 2004 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

Great quote, Kelli. I have read somewhere that we spend half of our lives

learning and the other half unlearning what we have learned.

posted by Tremac on November 1, 2004 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

Trinka I am sure that is true, but for me I find there is joy in the search

-- thanks for reading and for the great haiku.

posted by Tremac on November 1, 2004 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

Oops

I mean YOUR

posted by Holy_Grail on October 31, 2004 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Still enjoying you lovely and wise journey...

posted by Holy_Grail on October 31, 2004 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

Each and every day . . .

a rising awareness moves toward actualization.

I think that's beautiful and true of our human nature. Lovely. 

posted by Zachary.N.Miles on October 31, 2004 at 1:27 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, we fall into habituation "Could the young but realize how soon they

will become mere walking bundles of habit, they would give more heed to their conduct while in the plastic state.  Every smallest stroke of virtue or of vice leaves its ever so little scar"--William James

posted by Kelli on October 31, 2004 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

great haiku

the mystics all say
to find true enlightenment
stop looking, wake up

posted by trinka on October 31, 2004 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

Hey Kelli. Great "Awareness" haiku.

posted by Tremac on October 31, 2004 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

Hey, Tanoo. Yea!

 Thanks for reading.

posted by Tremac on October 31, 2004 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Kingmi, thanks again for an interesting batch of haiku

posted by Tremac on October 31, 2004 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

I AM AWARE NOW

BY HIS NON-REPONSIVENESS

HE HAS SOMEONE ELSE.

posted by Kelli on October 31, 2004 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Beachy

posted by Tremac on October 31, 2004 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

yea baby awareness is rising alot!!  

posted by Tanoolicious on October 31, 2004 at 11:52 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc,

My eldest daughter

"driving" my new-found freedom

Siddhartha once more!

posted by kingmi on October 31, 2004 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

Sends a flower

posted by beachbelle on October 31, 2004 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply