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Very nice, Pappy. Thank you for your haiku.

posted by Tremac on November 1, 2004 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

a note cc ANGELZ_MIND

we all have nothing

the secret link that binds us

form to hold our words 

posted by pappy on November 1, 2004 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

Incubus, I pick the one that gets me the morning glory...

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

Kelli, yes I know.

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

I'm holding seven strands of straw . . .

in my hand. Care to pick one?

posted by Zachary.N.Miles on October 30, 2004 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

yes, I would like to think so, but it is just worded a bit aggressively. No

worries, I got my point across, I'm not afraid of that, as you know

posted by Kelli on October 30, 2004 at 9:03 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, Kelli. I read that.

Maybe they were referring to the emotion/mood of the writing.    Feeling detached from your life.  On the outside looking in.   I know that it stirred up sad emotions in me, maybe you hit a nerve with them.  Or maybe they didn't get the figurative aspect of it and thought you were literally referring to a window.  I dunno.   Some people just don't get figurative writing.   Don't worry too much about it, though.   As long as they don't write something abusive, I'd say just let it roll off or block them if you feel so inclined.

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc, take a look at this comment on "my Window" haiku

technick, you don't even HAVE writing. Suck my ass. How's that?

Posted by Kelli on October 30, 2004 at 7:24 PM (permalink)

Kelli

Not good writing - at all.

Posted by technick on October 30, 2004 at 6:22 PM (permalink

posted by Kelli on October 30, 2004 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you T-T, I am glad you think so.

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 6:57 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc - This is a really special one.

posted by TAPS. on October 30, 2004 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

Amen, Tanoo.

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

the power to choose... Amen Tremacc

posted by Tanoolicious on October 30, 2004 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

No Kelli, I didn't but I will check it out now. Thanks.

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 9:44 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc did you see this one?

Inside My Head - 1 day ago
Love, A seabearing Vessel Haiku poem......................................
Everything Else - Popularity rank: 331

KELLI

posted by Kelli on October 30, 2004 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, Kelli.

I think we have been given the gift of the unending spiral... every choice creates a choice.

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, HolyG.

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony, yes.

I think deep down everyone knows, sometimes they just choose not to choose.   Thanks, you too.

posted by Tremac on October 30, 2004 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc, yes, God's gift.

posted by Kelli on October 30, 2004 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

I second Symphony's sentiments on that one!

posted by Holy_Grail on October 30, 2004 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

the power to choose

if only more people new they had a choice........excellent as always..........have a great weekend...take care

posted by _Symphony_ on October 30, 2004 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply