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Aww Kingme... thanks for the haiku.

 

taught from your actions

I am sure that you'll show her

-- she has what she needs

posted by Tremac on October 27, 2004 at 10:25 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc,

My babe is hurting.

I need to make her see

Compassion is all.

posted by kingmi on October 27, 2004 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, Dear Scribey. LOL.

posted by Tremac on October 27, 2004 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc--react to my words of wanting...

posted by scriber on October 27, 2004 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Symphony. You are great. I'm fine, thanks for asking.
Please enjoy your day.

posted by Tremac on October 27, 2004 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks so much Kelli, you are always reading between the lines.

posted by Tremac on October 27, 2004 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

hello tremacc..........great as always
I hope you are ok?...........take care

posted by _Symphony_ on October 27, 2004 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply

Tremacc, you're definately overlapping thoughts in your poetry. They seem
to say so much, with so little.

posted by Kelli on October 27, 2004 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

LOL HolyG. Anyway, it's all up to you.

posted by Tremac on October 27, 2004 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

Hello Tanoo. Thanks.

posted by Tremac on October 27, 2004 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply

thank you tremacc,..
Such a lovely way to start the day.

posted by Laroux on October 27, 2004 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc
I think I must be one of those quirky character actors playing a supporting role. 

posted by Holy_Grail on October 27, 2004 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning Tremacc.....

Yup we all play a part in the play called life

Hope you have a lovely day

posted by Tanoolicious on October 27, 2004 at 4:15 AM | link to this | reply

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