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Matos, yes my haiku can be dramatic at times. Thanks again.

posted by Tremac on November 17, 2004 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply

A dramatic haiku. I love it.

posted by Matos on November 17, 2004 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply

Inky, I am always taking the next step.

I focus on my frailties and push to move onward and upward.    I am getting there.   Thanks.

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

Take the next step.

posted by Zachary.N.Miles on October 23, 2004 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Red. I am inspired to be inspired.

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, HolyG. Glad you like this one.

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

This is great, Jemmie. So awesome for you.

Keep looking up.

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

Tanoo

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Laroux. Mamma Haiku!

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 5:28 PM | link to this | reply

Inspiring tremacc

 red

posted by redlunar on October 23, 2004 at 2:20 PM | link to this | reply

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This was a fantastic one!

posted by Holy_Grail on October 23, 2004 at 12:41 PM | link to this | reply

Exactly!

This is so true of what I was feeling last night when I got a sign from my dad!

posted by Jemmie211 on October 23, 2004 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply

so true Tremacc... thanks

posted by Tanoolicious on October 23, 2004 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc

Thank you for bringing Haiku into my little world. I love your perspective. 

posted by Laroux on October 23, 2004 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Kel.

 

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

Oh thanks Kingmi!

More haiku for me?

A girl could get use to this

--- spoil me if you dare

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Good one tremacc

posted by Kelli on October 23, 2004 at 12:10 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, don't you know Tanoo!

It's with those fragments of insight throughout the day. (smile).    

posted by Tremac on October 23, 2004 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc,

I do this finding

You speak of eloquently

Many times each day!

posted by kingmi on October 23, 2004 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

I wish I could find the brink of hope today........ Tremacc you know I love it

posted by Tanoolicious on October 23, 2004 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply