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After the storm, the flotsam and jetsam, shipwrecked on the beach?

posted by Blanche. on October 22, 2004 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

So many emotions

within one motion

of poetry.

Benjamin.

posted by A-and-B on October 22, 2004 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

Nice, really nice, honest and giving. Justsouno

posted by Justi on October 22, 2004 at 6:18 PM | link to this | reply

canine277

I liked your poem. A crystal cane in the wind, to land on the rocks.

posted by Laroux on October 22, 2004 at 6:11 PM | link to this | reply

Ariala,

Please do! I need my daily fix.

posted by canine277 on October 22, 2004 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

hahahaha, and here I called you a kind soul

  Is it time to conjure up Merlin again?

posted by Ariala on October 22, 2004 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you both

most of my poetry is too violent to print. People would think Ariala was MY profiler!

posted by canine277 on October 22, 2004 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

The tales from the tooth thing got me, but actually this is a good poem!!

posted by Kelli on October 22, 2004 at 5:49 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome poem! Says so much.

 

posted by Ariala on October 22, 2004 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply