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Yep, Beachbelle. Truly.

posted by Tremac on October 20, 2004 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Who dares wins

posted by beachbelle on October 20, 2004 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, Symphony! How could I have missed Symphony!

Thank you, Sym.   You know I appreciate you!

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Kelli, for your thoughts and for the wonderful haiku!

You are really pushing them on out there!

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Red. I am definitely encouraged by you all...

E-Shock and David1Spirit as well as Mia Ella have suggested this to me.    I am checking a few things out.   I will definitely keep you all in the know.

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc, this is a very, very good one!!

Access to success

is gained within your own mind.

No mind, no matter.

posted by Kelli on October 19, 2004 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

Awww!! HolyG!?!? Say it isn't so.... lol.

Thanks.

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Sue.

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

I think MiaElla is on to something....what about it? A book , a calendar, book marks? I think your words would inspire many...all you need is an agent and a publisher. Unless you want to make them yourself. red

posted by redlunar on October 19, 2004 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Very nice - and I don't even have a "me" version this time. 

posted by Holy_Grail on October 19, 2004 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice......

posted by 9STAR on October 19, 2004 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

Mia, thank you. Your words are very inspiring.

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc,

I was thinking your haiku's would be good in a pocket calendar. Also book marks.

Very inspiring, very hopeful.

posted by MiaElla on October 19, 2004 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Dave! Thanks for dropping in.

Hope you are well.

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

Nice to see you are still haiking Tremacc.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 19, 2004 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply

excellent as always

you are great...............take care

posted by _Symphony_ on October 19, 2004 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

No, Jemmie. I don't mind.

I am glad that you are feeling better.

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Tanoo! Appreciated! Rise and soar!

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Go take a look at my Gratitude blog.

If you want me to erase the haiku itself, I will.  Just let me know.

posted by Jemmie211 on October 19, 2004 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

yes we can dare to rise and soar........ looooooooooooooved it Tremacc  very inspirational

posted by Tanoolicious on October 19, 2004 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

We are pulling for you, Jemmie. Thanks for your great comment

 and for reading me.

posted by Tremac on October 19, 2004 at 5:43 AM | link to this | reply

I needed this

I need to get my sorry butt in gear and get out to hunt for a new job and to get my mind off my losses of late.  Excellent as always, tremacc.

posted by Jemmie211 on October 19, 2004 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply