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Inky, I'm with you!

To get where you haven't been, you have to do what you haven't done...

posted by Tremac on October 18, 2004 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

Thomas

Obviously, the door is locked in this particular haiku.   Thanks for reading.

posted by Tremac on October 18, 2004 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Ha, Vibrance! I am with you all the way.

posted by Tremac on October 18, 2004 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

Tanoo, you know it! Sometimes you have to, lol.

posted by Tremac on October 18, 2004 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

I don’t know about anyone else. . .

but I’ve just put my boots on.

posted by Zachary.N.Miles on October 18, 2004 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

Or twist the door knob

posted by ThomasFranklin on October 18, 2004 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

you got that one right!

sometimes we have to kick more than once. ~ Love, vib

posted by Vibrance on October 18, 2004 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

yes kick the damn door down!!      GREAT haiku.....

posted by Tanoolicious on October 18, 2004 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

LOL. Thanks, Red.

posted by Tremac on October 18, 2004 at 6:08 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

lol - excellent!  red

posted by redlunar on October 18, 2004 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

HA! Thanks, Symphony. You too!

 

posted by Tremac on October 18, 2004 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

lol...............yes I need to kick it in...........hehehehe

have a great day..........take care

posted by _Symphony_ on October 18, 2004 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

HolyG, thanks! LOL!

posted by Tremac on October 18, 2004 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Good idea - I have strong legs!

posted by Holy_Grail on October 18, 2004 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

Congrats, Beachy. That's great!

Sometimes you have to make your own opportunities.

posted by Tremac on October 18, 2004 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

Spot on.

That's what I did this year

posted by beachbelle on October 18, 2004 at 4:58 AM | link to this | reply