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Truly beautiful.

posted by Adaman on September 15, 2005 at 12:06 AM | link to this | reply

LOL, funny HolyG and far from it!

Thank you for the compliment, too.

posted by Tremac on October 17, 2004 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Tanoo--

posted by Tremac on October 17, 2004 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

Oops

I mean "Brick." 

posted by Holy_Grail on October 17, 2004 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

This is where I make a joke about myself being one vrick short of a load, but instead I will just say that is very lovely! 

posted by Holy_Grail on October 17, 2004 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Tremacc.... oh and great minds do think alike hehehe

posted by Tanoolicious on October 17, 2004 at 1:38 AM | link to this | reply

HEY INHERENT RIGHTS! WOO HOO!

I like that quote.   I had actually considered using the word stone but I kept getting an image of a brick wall.  You know, like "running into a brick wall", so I used brick instead.  Great minds think alike, I always say.  Thanks for your great thoughts.

posted by Tremac on October 16, 2004 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

Great tremacc!

This reminds me of something I heard a wise person say to me once: any stone could build the Berlin wall; but not any thought could keep it there.

posted by InherentRights on October 16, 2004 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Tanoo.

I am glad that everything is falling into place for you and it seems to me that great minds think alike. 

Yes, one brick at a time.   Thanks for reading.

posted by Tremac on October 16, 2004 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

This is beautiful and you know Tremacc.... today I was thinking that im slowly getting my life back on track again and here you go mentioning one brick at a time....  I love how your hiakus relate to me so much.... yes there are a few bricks already and the rest will slowly follow

posted by Tanoolicious on October 16, 2004 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

Hmmm... Inky. That is an interesting coincidence.

I know you are tumbling, babe.    Thanks for reading.

posted by Tremac on October 16, 2004 at 12:05 PM | link to this | reply

This is so weird. . .

All of a sudden redlunar has come into my field of vision four or five times. . . .

Another excellent haiku. I'm tumbling.

posted by Zachary.N.Miles on October 16, 2004 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

HELLO INNS! Thanks for dropping by.

posted by Tremac on October 16, 2004 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

No. Thank you Red.

posted by Tremac on October 16, 2004 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Rach. Enjoy your day.

posted by Tremac on October 16, 2004 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

posted by theinnkeepersdaughter on October 16, 2004 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

Oh tremacc --

thank you so much! What beautiful words and thought....and to have been an inspiration, I am deeply moved... red

posted by redlunar on October 16, 2004 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely!

As always!

posted by RachelAnna on October 16, 2004 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Sym. Enjoy your day.

posted by Tremac on October 16, 2004 at 11:03 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful as always

take care

posted by _Symphony_ on October 16, 2004 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply