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MiaElla --the place is all too familiar...nice work.

posted by scriber on October 16, 2004 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

nice.  a between the lines read...

posted by Tremac on October 15, 2004 at 3:56 PM | link to this | reply

excellent expressed

posted by _Symphony_ on October 15, 2004 at 11:06 AM | link to this | reply

tg,

oh...yeah...lmao...Emily's stuff rhymed...but it was different back then.

posted by MiaElla on October 15, 2004 at 7:34 AM | link to this | reply

tg,

I just attempted to read it, but I have trouble getting into poems that  rhyme....lol.  I'm a picky poet reader...la!

posted by MiaElla on October 15, 2004 at 7:32 AM | link to this | reply

mia bella

(that was not a typo) i hope for our sake more miss d than miss p.  tg

posted by tbgroucho on October 15, 2004 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

tg,

I've never heard My Papa's Waltz before...I guess I'll have to look it up....I do think though I was Sylvia Plath or Emily Dickenson in a past life though...not sure which though...I am more of a recluse...so perhaps Emily.

posted by MiaElla on October 15, 2004 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply

mia

bella!  moving, crushing, giving Roethke a run for his money ("My Papa's Waltz")tg

posted by tbgroucho on October 15, 2004 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

Tanoolicious

My grin (from ear to ear) is a really big thank you. =)

posted by MiaElla on October 15, 2004 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Wow.... this is great!!!    These lines gave me shivers

the smile beneath mother's
yellow daisy and purple moon eye

posted by Tanoolicious on October 15, 2004 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply