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MiaElla --the place is all too familiar...nice work.
posted by
scriber
on October 16, 2004 at 1:14 PM
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nice. a between the lines read...
posted by
Tremac
on October 15, 2004 at 3:56 PM
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excellent expressed
posted by
_Symphony_
on October 15, 2004 at 11:06 AM
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tg,
oh...yeah...lmao...Emily's stuff rhymed...but it was different back then.
posted by
MiaElla
on October 15, 2004 at 7:34 AM
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tg,
I just attempted to read it, but I have trouble getting into poems that rhyme....lol. 
I'm a picky poet reader...la!
posted by
MiaElla
on October 15, 2004 at 7:32 AM
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mia bella
(that was not a typo) i hope for our sake more miss d than miss p. tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on October 15, 2004 at 7:30 AM
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tg,
I've never heard
My Papa's Waltz before...I guess I'll have to look it up....I do think though I was Sylvia Plath or Emily Dickenson in a past life though...not sure which though...I am more of a recluse...so perhaps Emily.
posted by
MiaElla
on October 15, 2004 at 7:25 AM
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mia
bella! moving, crushing, giving Roethke a run for his money ("My Papa's Waltz")tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on October 15, 2004 at 7:20 AM
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Tanoolicious
My grin (from ear to ear) is a really big thank you. =)
posted by
MiaElla
on October 15, 2004 at 7:18 AM
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Wow.... this is great!!! 
These lines gave me shivers
the smile beneath mother's
yellow daisy and purple moon eye
posted by
Tanoolicious
on October 15, 2004 at 7:00 AM
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