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I agree with you on that Tremacc ....... Thanks for your beautiful Haikus

posted by Tanoolicious on October 15, 2004 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Redlunar, thank you. That is a wonderful thought.

You have made my day.

posted by Tremac on October 15, 2004 at 5:41 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Tanoo.

I think in the whole grand scheme of things, we are not so different.   Thank you for getting me and for reading me.

posted by Tremac on October 15, 2004 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

you are wonderful on touching on a universal theme in a beautiful way....red

posted by redlunar on October 14, 2004 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

The amazing thing that each time I read one of your wonderful Haikus they relate to something I am going through at the moment.... I love them!

posted by Tanoolicious on October 14, 2004 at 10:23 AM | link to this | reply

Hey Symphony! Wow!

I think I may have touched on something that you recognize and can relate too, ehh?        Thanks for getting and reading me.

posted by Tremac on October 14, 2004 at 5:34 AM | link to this | reply

excellent..................excellent....................excellent..........

excellent..................excellent....................excellent..........excellent..................excellent.......excelllent

thanks for sharing

posted by _Symphony_ on October 14, 2004 at 5:21 AM | link to this | reply

Scriber, I have the funny feeling that you are thinking about the word

gratification, lol.   I don't think you will ever be satisfied or find The Cure.    Just joking, but seriously though--  I believe you validate yourself through your writing.  You don't settle for anything less than what fulfills you in that respect.

posted by Tremac on October 14, 2004 at 5:21 AM | link to this | reply

Tremacc--I seek but can't find....lol

posted by scriber on October 14, 2004 at 5:09 AM | link to this | reply

I just thought about the songs Perfect and Forgiven by Alanis Morisette.   Hmmm...

posted by Tremac on October 14, 2004 at 5:01 AM | link to this | reply

HolyG. I agree. I truly believe that.

But for some reason, within ourself  is usually the last place we seem to think of when we are hurting or doubtful.   We seek validation in others.    Maybe it goes back to childhood.   Looking to our parents and being encouraged to do that.    To seek approval from them above all else.    Including above ourselves.

posted by Tremac on October 14, 2004 at 4:57 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

And it doesn't take much effort if you're truly seeking it I guess! 

posted by Holy_Grail on October 14, 2004 at 4:48 AM | link to this | reply

HELLO TIKD! Sorry you had a meltdown!

 It happens to the best of us on any given day usually on hump day for me so I am not surprised.    Feel free to drop by anytime you want.

posted by Tremac on October 14, 2004 at 4:24 AM | link to this | reply

Where were you on Tuesday...

when I was busy having my meltdown?  I think I will be coming back to read this poem every once in awhile.

posted by theinnkeepersdaughter on October 14, 2004 at 4:00 AM | link to this | reply