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Beachy, it's true.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 11:30 PM | link to this | reply

haha

posted by beachbelle on October 13, 2004 at 11:20 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Incubus for seeing and getting that. You rock!

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 10:20 PM | link to this | reply

These haiku are very visual. . .

A spiral that contracts and expands through a being is a really neat image! Wonderful.

posted by Zachary.N.Miles on October 13, 2004 at 9:23 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Kelli. Lol, a haiku explosion?

Cute.   I hope you get a chance to check out more.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you HolyG. So glad it fits your groove.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc, I had to get caught up, you really seem to be having Haiku

explosions!  Considering what I read from the 10th up to today, very beautiful!

posted by Kelli on October 13, 2004 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

That one was beautiful!

posted by Holy_Grail on October 13, 2004 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Sym. You too. As always, I appreciate you.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 4:10 PM | link to this | reply

THANKS LAROUX.

That diddy of yours is the summation of perfect motherhood.   I love reading about you and your Sophie.   Thanks for the mommy haiku (wouldn't that be cute, if you started a blog like that?).   Very cute.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply

Beachbelle, I am not worried about you in the least bit.

Look out world.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Redlunar. Yes I think we all have our moments

even sha(wo)men such as yourself.         Thank you for your feedback and for reading me.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 4:04 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, Jemmie. Sweetie it takes time.

I think I kind of had you in the back of my mind when I wrote it.    I love the posts about your father.  You are doing fine.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 4:02 PM | link to this | reply

excellent as always

take care and enjoy your day

posted by _Symphony_ on October 13, 2004 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc, Everyday I have a new favorite!

This is a little ditty I made up for my little one over lunch the other day.

I love you so much

I will peel your peas and grapes

No thanks required

Hey, its my first one. Ok - I'll work on it. Thanks for the daily inspiration!

posted by Laroux on October 13, 2004 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

I need to rebound into action

posted by beachbelle on October 13, 2004 at 5:42 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

I have to agree with Jemmie -- I could sure use a rebound too. Thanks for the sweet message. red

posted by redlunar on October 13, 2004 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

I need a rebound back into life.  I'm only going through the motions.  Alive, yet not living.

posted by Jemmie211 on October 13, 2004 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply