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I enjoyed reading it and even understood what you were saying.
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Passionflower
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October 11, 2004
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Jimmy
It seems fine but oh my I don't miss writing academic essays. There is one point I would look at the mixed and rather busy metaphors about uphill and the level playing field . Simplify that
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beachbelle
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October 10, 2004
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I am afraid I cannot comment properly on this...
but I will be paying attention to your blogs. I am also a dropout (just finished getting my diploma through adult education classes) but I would like to continue my education and go on to University. Your posts are giving me a taste of the challenges I will be facing (once I get enough money together to even try enrolling).
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theinnkeepersdaughter
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October 10, 2004
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