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Thank you, Kat. I appreciate your comment very much.

posted by Tremac on October 13, 2004 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

Truly wonderful work here Tremacc. I enjoy reading them. You have a real gift for this form.

posted by PoetRaye on October 12, 2004 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

Well, hello Wilds!

Thank you for noticing and appreciating that.      Enjoy your day.

posted by Tremac on October 11, 2004 at 5:20 AM | link to this | reply

OH!

This one is jazzy!  I love how you've worked the presentation to coincide with the message.  Excellent work!

posted by Wildwoman_Laloba on October 11, 2004 at 5:08 AM | link to this | reply

Incubus, isn't that always the way?

You are very cool.   Thanks much.

posted by Tremac on October 11, 2004 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Red. Glad you like...

posted by Tremac on October 11, 2004 at 4:57 AM | link to this | reply

Hello Original Influence. How are you? Thank you very mich.

 

posted by Tremac on October 11, 2004 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

Break on through. . .

There's nothing wrong with redefining yourself. Cool.

posted by Zachary.N.Miles on October 10, 2004 at 8:26 PM | link to this | reply

oooooooh this one is very good.....

 red

posted by redlunar on October 10, 2004 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

tremac,

cleverly done!

posted by Original_Influence on October 10, 2004 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Hey Symphony. I do remember reading about your long-lost sister, Kelly.

We do many times seem to be in sync.   One never knows...  you tell me.  No.  You tell you.

posted by Tremac on October 10, 2004 at 11:08 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks HolyG. Oh, let's think. What could be forming...

kick ass writing, maybe?  

posted by Tremac on October 10, 2004 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

Kelli, what a wonderful comment in the form of a great haiku.

Thanks for getting me and for reading me.

posted by Tremac on October 10, 2004 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Laroux, for your feedback and for reading me.   You are great.

posted by Tremac on October 10, 2004 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

wow there you go...again reading my mind

it gave me goose bumps............I am thinking of the past because I am trying to find my sister...........is this a message to me.......lol

hope you are ok?............take care

posted by _Symphony_ on October 10, 2004 at 10:54 AM | link to this | reply

Good one!  I just fear what might be forming!  (For me.) 

posted by Holy_Grail on October 10, 2004 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

Tremacc

Inspirational!

and filled with enlightenment!

Thanking you for that!

posted by Kelli on October 10, 2004 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Really beautiful!

posted by Laroux on October 10, 2004 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply