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loanlady - or not harriet - good luck with the novel. And thanx for the

financial info! :)

In the early '80s I worked for Bank One in Commerical Loan Colateral Compliance.

I still can't balance my checkbook.

posted by Hollee on October 6, 2004 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

Glad to help!  :-)  Just remember who the criticism is coming from; that's a pretty important part of it, too.  If you know the person's views on things, you can better understand their criticism and better decide whether or not it will be beneficial to listen to.

posted by roofpig on October 6, 2004 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

Roof you convinced me that I ought to get some adult eyes reading it, point taken well. Better have criticism and feedback than work in the dark. 

posted by the-loanlady on October 6, 2004 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

I've gotten to the point where I'll let anyone with eyes read my manuscripts.  Even if the response I get is not the one I wanted, it still makes me think hard about things.

posted by roofpig on October 6, 2004 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

That's a terrible way to look at it...

when it's finished you will sell it and look forward to the adulation and showering cash...

posted by jimmy68 on October 6, 2004 at 11:57 AM | link to this | reply