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Hey T.

You didn't pick up on it because I threw you off by adding something totally weird.   Thanks for reading me and I am honored that I can give you something to ponder on throughout the day.   Thanks!

posted by Tremac on October 5, 2004 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks T.

You didn't pick up on it because I threw you off by adding something totally weird.   Thanks for reading me and I am honored that I can give you something to ponder on throughout the day.   Thanks!

posted by Tremac on October 5, 2004 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

Tremacc - thanks for the explanation--it makes sense. Don't know

why I didn't pick up on that.   It's like a daily devotion blog.   If you read it in the morning, you can ponder on it through the day.  

posted by TAPS. on October 5, 2004 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

Redlunar, what a wonderful compliment. Thank you.

posted by Tremac on October 5, 2004 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Wenchy.

posted by Tremac on October 5, 2004 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc, once again you have brought forth the words that I need to read

this day., this moment...thank you for your beautiful words and insight.

posted by redlunar on October 5, 2004 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

so lovely :) x

posted by Moohahaha on October 5, 2004 at 3:54 AM | link to this | reply

Inherent Rights, thanks sweetie! Much appreciated! Seriously.

I am just glad that people get me, but I know that anyone who is here on Blogit knows what that is like.

posted by Tremac on October 4, 2004 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc, your words are beautiful

and always refreshing. You're a gift to all who have ears to hear you!

posted by InherentRights on October 4, 2004 at 7:37 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Laroux and welcome to Blogit! I like your Moments Of Clarity blog

and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

posted by Tremac on October 4, 2004 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Ha. HolyG, she just may whisper in my ear from time to time...

your mother sounds pretty cool.

posted by Tremac on October 4, 2004 at 7:30 PM | link to this | reply

Jemmie, I know that you are a joyful and grateful person.

I read your gratitude blog.   Again, I am so sorry for your loss.   I know that I can't even begin to understand what you are going through right now.   My hope is that you will find joy in the memories of your father.    From what I have read, the two of you had an incredible relationship.   Thanks for reading me.   I appreciate you.

posted by Tremac on October 4, 2004 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

Tapsel-T

 First Day Haiku is for the first day of the week, Second Day Haiku is the same for Monday, the second day of the week, Wednesday, Third Day Haiku, etc.   Sorry for confusing you.   I am just being weird again, lol.     Thanks for reading me.   I appreciate you.

posted by Tremac on October 4, 2004 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Symphony, I am great.

Thank you.  

posted by Tremac on October 4, 2004 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

What a joyous discovery you are for me! Thanks

posted by Laroux on October 4, 2004 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Hey - Have you been hired by my mother to write these??? 

posted by Holy_Grail on October 4, 2004 at 4:27 PM | link to this | reply

Even though I don't comment as much, I still read your haiku daily.

I do have some joy in my life...just wish I had some more right now.  I could really use it.

posted by Jemmie211 on October 4, 2004 at 3:32 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc - I'm confused here. What do you mean.....

"First Day Haiku"  and "Second Day Haiku".   I've been reading your great Haiku poems for quite a long while now.

posted by TAPS. on October 4, 2004 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

excellent as always

hope you are ok?........take care

posted by _Symphony_ on October 4, 2004 at 10:22 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

posted by ladyofshalott on October 4, 2004 at 8:53 AM | link to this | reply

David, thank you. That sounds like a plan...

posted by Tremac on October 4, 2004 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Lady. Much appreciated.

posted by Tremac on October 4, 2004 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

I will do just that!

Just surrendering and allowing it to happen!  

posted by David1Spirit on October 4, 2004 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

once again.......very nice.

posted by ladyofshalott on October 4, 2004 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply