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Oh, Scribey-- but of course! I'm on my way...

posted by Tremac on October 1, 2004 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Hello Wiley. Thank you. Yes, haiku is a japanese poetry form.

I appreciate your feedback, hope this is not your last visit here.

posted by Tremac on October 1, 2004 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc--gather the remnants and come on down...

posted by scriber on October 1, 2004 at 11:03 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc
I liked that very much. I asked once on Blogit what is Haiku, I really don't know. Is it Japanese poetry?? Thanx kiddoHave a Happy weekend eh.

posted by WileyJohn on October 1, 2004 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

Redlunar, thanks so much. I am inspired by you all as well.
If you get a chance, please read some of my earlier haiku.  HolyG has pointed out to me that I go through "themes".   So there may be something to your liking there.

posted by Tremac on October 1, 2004 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

Hello, Symphony. Fair to partly cloud, lol. Thanks for asking.
Hope you are well.

posted by Tremac on October 1, 2004 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

Such true words...
tremacc...I am so enjoying your writing...this is one of my favorites so far...remarkably inspiring

posted by redlunar on October 1, 2004 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

excellent as always
hope you are ok?..........take care

posted by _Symphony_ on October 1, 2004 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Mia.
 I really appreciate that coming from you, our resident poet!       I am inspired a little more here everyday...

posted by Tremac on October 1, 2004 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

And that is the true sign of a great poet...
taking a personal piece and making work for everyone...you definitely have the poetic juice or whatever you want to call it.

posted by MiaElla on October 1, 2004 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Mia.
I was more or less thinking of my life when I wrote it, but it is a part of the overall bigger picture, isn't it? 

posted by Tremac on October 1, 2004 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

Just beautiful!

And very fitting Haiku for the times we are in.

posted by MiaElla on October 1, 2004 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

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