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Oh, Scribey-- but of course! I'm on my way...
posted by
Tremac
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October 1, 2004
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Hello Wiley. Thank you. Yes, haiku is a japanese poetry form.
I appreciate your feedback, hope this is not your last visit here.
posted by
Tremac
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October 1, 2004
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tremacc--gather the remnants and come on down...
posted by
scriber
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October 1, 2004
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tremacc
I liked that very much. I asked once on Blogit what is Haiku, I really don't know. Is it Japanese poetry?? Thanx kiddo

Have a Happy weekend eh.
posted by
WileyJohn
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October 1, 2004
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Redlunar, thanks so much. I am inspired by you all as well.
If you get a chance, please read some of my earlier haiku. HolyG has pointed out to me that I go through "themes". So there may be something to your liking there.
posted by
Tremac
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October 1, 2004
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Hello, Symphony. Fair to partly cloud, lol. Thanks for asking.
Hope you are well.
posted by
Tremac
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October 1, 2004
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Such true words...
tremacc...I am so enjoying your writing...this is one of my favorites so far...remarkably inspiring
posted by
redlunar
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October 1, 2004
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excellent as always
hope you are ok?..........take care
posted by
_Symphony_
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October 1, 2004
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Thank you, Mia.
I really appreciate that coming from you, our resident poet!

I am inspired a little more here everyday...
posted by
Tremac
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October 1, 2004
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And that is the true sign of a great poet...
taking a personal piece and making work for everyone...you definitely have the poetic juice or whatever you want to call it.
posted by
MiaElla
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October 1, 2004
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Thank you, Mia.
I was more or less thinking of my life when I wrote it, but it is a part of the overall bigger picture, isn't it?
posted by
Tremac
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October 1, 2004
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Just beautiful!
And very fitting Haiku for the times we are in.
posted by
MiaElla
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October 1, 2004
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