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Beachbelle, you think so?

I think there's always something there if you dig deep enough, especially in the empty thoughts--- sometimes they are the best springboards for meditation, I believe.  

posted by Tremac on September 24, 2004 at 12:44 PM | link to this | reply

Inherent Rights, I totally agree on your theory.

Thanks for your feedback.

posted by Tremac on September 24, 2004 at 12:36 PM | link to this | reply

But sometimes thoughts are empty;-)

posted by beachbelle on September 24, 2004 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

Great tremacc

I hear some interesting things when I am quiet and listen to what my thoughts are telling me. We are bombarded so often by noise and distractions that we easily can go through life not paying attention. Great poem!

posted by InherentRights on September 24, 2004 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Symphony.

  I appreciate you.

posted by Tremac on September 23, 2004 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks so much, Oceandancer. Ha, goodnight.

posted by Tremac on September 23, 2004 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Tanoo. You are great.

posted by Tremac on September 23, 2004 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

Rare, HolyG?  Ha.   I think not!    Thank you.

posted by Tremac on September 23, 2004 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

excellent

take care and have a nice day

posted by _Symphony_ on September 23, 2004 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful

Morning, Tremacc!

posted by Oceandancer on September 23, 2004 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

Yes true inspiration indeed!!! Lovely!! 

posted by Tanoolicious on September 23, 2004 at 5:41 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Excellent.  I just need to act on those (rare) inspiring thoughts I have. 

posted by Holy_Grail on September 23, 2004 at 4:55 AM | link to this | reply