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Ha, Beachbelle.  That was tongue-in-cheek, I believe.   I think you have a very strong sense of self (conscience and conscious), at least it seems that way from what I have read of you.

posted by Tremac on September 11, 2004 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

In my case it takes a while to achieve consciousness

posted by beachbelle on September 11, 2004 at 2:20 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, Klara! Thanks! You have really made my day, today.

posted by Tremac on September 11, 2004 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

Glorious. You amaze me with this!

posted by KlaraRoberts on September 11, 2004 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

You're welcome. That's more or less up to you.

But if you keep writing poems about women, I'm pretty sure they will get read. 

posted by Tremac on September 11, 2004 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply

Rachel Anna, your thoughts are much appreciated. Thanks for reading me.

posted by Tremac on September 11, 2004 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

Tremacc

Thankx for reading my poem and hope more people read my work.

posted by sKuBy on September 11, 2004 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful.

As always.

posted by RachelAnna on September 11, 2004 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Skuby! I enjoyed your Destiny poem.

Welcome to Blogit!  I look forward to your feedback and thanks for reading me.

posted by Tremac on September 11, 2004 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

Symphony, you are great. It's not the same without your feedback.

Thanks for reading me.

posted by Tremac on September 11, 2004 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks HolyG!   You know I appreciate you, girl!

posted by Tremac on September 11, 2004 at 11:57 AM | link to this | reply

tremacc

Nice haikus... looking foward in reading more.

posted by sKuBy on September 11, 2004 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

excellent as always

have a nice day......take care

posted by _Symphony_ on September 11, 2004 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

Nice one tremacc!

posted by Holy_Grail on September 11, 2004 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply

Tanoo, I appreciate you. Thanks for reading me.

posted by Tremac on September 11, 2004 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply

Loved it!

posted by Tanoolicious on September 11, 2004 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply