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Mia,
Really holds the reader, Lady! Great as ever!
-tp
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twhamilton
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September 11, 2004
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This is excellent!!!
posted by
Melodystar
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September 10, 2004
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this is excellent
well done
posted by
_Symphony_
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September 10, 2004
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Mia, I slid right into this one. A slippery feel of familiarity. Very nice.
posted by
Tremac
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September 9, 2004
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Nice poem!
posted by
Original_Influence
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September 9, 2004
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Nice work!!
posted by
Holy_Grail
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September 9, 2004
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Great work capturing that moment.
I really get the unopened bills on the counter top.
posted by
Temple
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September 9, 2004
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Very nice.
posted by
RachelAnna
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September 9, 2004
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posted by
Ariala
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September 9, 2004
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